Asaf Bartov (ijon) wrote,
Asaf Bartov
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Sonnet LXIV, take 2

Thank you, all who commented on my previous draft of my translation of Shakespeare's Sonnet LXIV. I've made some amendments and what I hope are improvements, and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a (second) look. The new version is here. If you want to compare, the previous draft was moved here.

Thanks!
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