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Sonnet LXIV, take 2 - Impressions and Expressions of Ijon
May 27th, 2003
12:39 am


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Sonnet LXIV, take 2
Thank you, all who commented on my previous draft of my translation of Shakespeare's Sonnet LXIV. I've made some amendments and what I hope are improvements, and I'd really appreciate it if you could take a (second) look. The new version is here. If you want to compare, the previous draft was moved here.


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Current Music: King Crimson -- Happy Family

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Date:May 29th, 2003 11:24 am (UTC)

Joy to read.

I have no poetry background whatsoever, thus let me spare you from my (probably silly) comments.

However, I had enjoyed the sonet greatly. Both the original (which, to my shame, I had not read beforehead) and the translation (which is, in my humble opinion, wonderfull).

Thanks :)
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